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 Okay so I'm in the 7th grade. I want to do a story about a girl who goes on vacation with her family(parents and younger brother) to hawaii or a beachy place and she really didnt want to.. but then she gets lost? what can happen? nothing cheesy please.. something easy i can write about quickly. she can get lost? but what happens and how does it end? or she finds something? ...

 Can someone write a story about a ten year old girl living on the streets because she was an orphan??? Thanks! ...

 I am thinking about writing a bunch of short stories that all come together as one, and it is like with a super hero teenager(like all of those comics) because i want it to appeal to younger kids or whatever. i have the basic idea but still need some little things to throw in there. any ideas? ...

 Significance of the two stories To conservative Christians, Genesis is inerrant: it is completely truthful and contained no error in its original form. God inspired Moses to write the book and preserved him from including any errors. Thus the Noahic flood really happened exactly as stated in Genesis. The similarities between the Babylonian and Hebrew texts were probably caused by two factors: both were accounts of the same worldwide flood. The Genesis account is absolutely true and was written during the Exodus of the Jewish people from Egypt. The Babylonian account was written later; its author may have copied elements from the Hebrew story. "The Epic of Gilgamesh, then, contains the corrupted account as preserved and embellished by peoples who did not follow the God of the Hebrews." 7 To liberal Christians, the flood story in Genesis were mainly written by three unknown authors: "J" used Yahweh as the name of God, and wrote circa 848 BCE to 722 BCE in the southern kingdom of Judah. "P" a priest who lived much later, sometime before 587 BCE. "R", an unknown redactor, who joined the writings of J and P and two other writers together. He added only one sentence to the flood story. This interleaving is shown elsewhere in this web site in color-coded text. The story is a legend with spiritual significance. However there was no actual worldwide flood. The story is a myth, derived largely from the earlier Babylonian account. It was picked up by the ancient Israelites as an oral tradition and later written down by J and P. To some Agnostics, Atheists, etc, the flood story is pure myth. The viciousness of the God or Gods who are said to be responsible for the flood is shown by the lack of concern for the men, women, children, youths, infants and newborns who died a terrible death by drowning. The myth shows how Gods are created by the minds of humans, rather than vice versa. The flood account gradually evolved from the original Babylonian version to the Hebrew version. The Babylonian version may have been a distorted record of an ancient flood which occurred when the Mediterranean Sea partially emptied into the Black Sea circa 5600 BCE. Which Came First Noah or Ut-Napishtim? The Babylonian tablets which contain the full story of the flood have been dated circa 650 BCE. However, portions of the story have been found on tablets from about 2000 BCE. A study of the language used in the tablets indicates that the story originated much earlier than 2000 BCE. 3 Variations of the original story have been found translated into other ancient languages. 4 Many conservative Christians believe that the flood occurred in 2349 BCE, and that the account in Genesis was written by Moses in the 1450's BCE, shortly before his death. 5,8 Thus, the Babylonian text must be a corrupted version based on a Paganized adaptation of the true story in Genesis. Alternatively, it might be an independent attempt at describing the world-wide flood. Liberal theologians, noting the different names used to refer to God, and the different writing styles throughout the Penaeuch (first 5 books of the Hebrew Scriptures), believe that Genesis was assembled over a 4 century interval, circa 950 to 540 BCE by authors from a variety of traditions. 6 J and P seem to have based their stories on two original stories from Mesopotamian sources, perhaps based on a massive series of floods in Ur and surrounding areas circa 2800 BCE which would be perceived by the local population as being very extensive; perhaps ...

 1.Blue Geranium and other stories 2.Death by drowning and other stories 3.Double sin and other stories 4.Herb of Death and other stories 5.How does your garden grow? And other stories 6.Miss Marple: the complete short story 7.Star over Bethlehem and other stories 8.The Accident and other stories 9.The golden ball and other stories 10.The Harlequin Tea set and other cases 11.The regatta mystery and other stories 12.The under dog and other stories 13.Three blind mice and other stories 14.Tuesday night club and other stories 15.Witness for the prosecution and other stories 16. Mr. Parker Pyne, Detective (Parker Pyne Investigates) i did serch Agatha Christie on Amazon to get all of the titles however i will google it now ...

 I like to be entertaining. When i share personal stories people rarely join in and entertain me with their personal stories. Stories of steeling, sneeking, running, toaking, driving, rock and roll show stories, traveling stories, stupid human stories. So i say, "I want to share a personal story, OK? Pick one of these three: the one about the purple eal, the story about sneaking into rock concerts or one about touching the taps. And people usually pick on they want to here and i entertain them with a story for a few minutes. Like the one where i fell out of a tree. Or finding an answer in the Bible. Or seeing a "Sundog" from above. Or driving the Cop car. Or the white Polynesian guy. Or the Halibut. Or the Crow. Or the Bear. Or the Bison. Or the Eagle. Or the Bear poo. Or the greatest example of drinking i have ever seen? ...

 additional details: the story is using for cheating the kids, when i was young, my mom want me sleep, but i don't want to sleep, i want to play..so my mom telling me the story, i listening it, and soon i was fast asleep................................. so far from now, there was mountain where a anciant temple located the top of the mountain, and there was a older Buddhist monk telling a story and the younger monk listening. what is the story? the story is " so far from now, there was mountain where a anciant temple located the top of the mountain, and there was a older Buddhist monk telling a story and the younger monk listening. what is the story? the story is " so far from now, there was mountain where a anciant temple located the top of the mountain, and there was a older Buddhist monk telling a story and the younger monk listening. what is the story? the story is ......"(it repeated again and again) ...

 additional details: the story is using for cheating the kids, when i was young, my mom want me sleep, but i don't want to sleep, i want to play..so my mom telling me the story, i listening it, and soon i was fast asleep........................... so far from now, there was mountain where a anciant temple located the top of the mountain, and there was a older Buddhist monk telling a story and the younger monk listening. what is the story? the story is " so far from now, there was mountain where a anciant temple located the top of the mountain, and there was a older Buddhist monk telling a story and the younger monk listening. what is the story? the story is " so far from now, there was mountain where a anciant temple located the top of the mountain, and there was a older Buddhist monk telling a story and the younger monk listening. what is the story? the story is ......"(it repeated again and again ...

 There is a short story i read and had years ago but lost it through the moves I have made in my life. Please help me find this story again. It is a chritian story of the death of Christ. In the story it is about a Centarian who was warming himself by a fire with a stranger and he told the stranger what had happen that day...that he took part in Christ's death...at the end of the story the other man showed his hands and he had holes where they drove the stake into him... If you can help me I would appreciate it...Thank you in advance. I was told this story comes out around Easter time... neither one of those two is what i am looking. this as far as i know wasn't made into a movie. it was a short story. maybe a page or two...but no more than that. these answers are not what i am looking for...therefore i cannot choose between them... ...

 God sent Hagar and the first born of Abraham into the wilderness when Ishmael was a baby?.. and not when he was a 17 year old like what the scholars wrote in the bible. A mother does not carry a 17 year old on her shoulder and then place the crying child of 17 yrs. under a bush and walk away while he dies of thirst. It is abundantly clear from the story in Gen. 21:14-19 that Ishmael was a little baby at that time. Following is the documentation of this statement: According to Gen. 16:16 Abraham was 86 years old when Ishmael was born. And according to Gen.21:5 Abraham was one hundred years old when Isaac was born. It follows that Ishmael was already fourteen years old when his younger brother Isaac was born. According to Gen. 21:14-19, the jealousy incident took place after Issac was weaned. Biblical scholars tell us that ?the child was weaned about the age of three?. It follows that when Hagar and Ishmael were taken away Ishmael was a full grown teenager seventeen year old. The profile of Ishmael in Gen. 21:14-19, however , is that of a small baby and not of a teenager. Why ? First : According to the Interpreters Bible , the original Hebrew for Gen.21:14 was ??and put the child upon her shoulder?. The same reading is rendered in the Revised Standard Edition of the Bible. How would a mother carry a Seventeen year old teenager ?upon her shoulder? Certainly he was strong enough to carry his mother ! Ishmael must have been a baby . Second : In Gen. 21:15 we are told that Hagar ?cast? the child under one of the shrubs. Again, according to this Biblical text Ishmael must have been a baby and not a seventeen year old man. Third: In Gen. 21:16 we are told that Hagar sat away so that she may not see the death of the child before her eyes. Is that a profile of a husky seventeen year old teenager who was probably capable of being worried about his mother dying before his eyes? Or is it obviously a profile of a small helpless baby or at most a small child? Fourth : According to Gen. 21:17, the angels told Hagar ?arise, lift up the lad?. Is a seventeen year old young man a proper object to be ?lifted up? by a woman? Or is that a reference to a small child or baby? Fifth: In Gen. 21:19, we are told that Hagar went to fill the bottle with water ?and give the lad a drink?. One would expect a strong young man of seventeen to go and bring water to his mother instead. The non Jewish version of the story is fully consistent and coherent from A to Z; Ishmael was a baby and Isaac was not born yet when this incident took place. This coherence and consistency are confirmed by centuries-old traditions and even actual locations in Mecca where Hagar and Ishmael settled. This clearly implies that the real reason behind their settlement in Arabia (Paran) was not the dictation, jealousy, ego or sense of racial superiority on the part of Sarah. It was rather God?s plan; pure and simple. The lineage of Ishmael was to be protected from the disasters that were to befall Jerusalem and the surrounding area. It may be relevant to indicate that this issue is not the only instance of inconsistency in respect to Ishmael?s story. The Interpreters Bible compares the story of Hagar and Ishmael in Gen. 21:14-19 with that in an earlier chapter (Gen. 16:1-16) and concludes ?the inclusion in Genesis of both stories so nearly alike and yet sufficiently different to be inconsistent, is one of many instances of the reluctance of the compilers to sacrifice any of the traditions which has become established in Israel.? (Interpreters Bible, ibid, p. 604) Obviously early scholars fabricated the story of a spat between Isaac and Ishmael so they could disown the first born and have a God only for themselves to the exclusion of all others. ---------- 1-----After Abraham had lived ten years in the land of Canaan, Abram's wife Sarai took Hagar the Egyptian, her maid, and gave her to her husband Abram as HIS WIFE. -- GENESIS 16:3 2------So Hagar bore Abram a son; and Abram called the name of HIS SON, whom Hagar bore, ISHMAEL. - GENESIS 16:15 //// ...

 so far from now, there was mountain where a anciant temple located the top of the mountain, and there was a older Buddhist monk telling a story and the younger monk listening. what is the story? the story is " so far from now, there was mountain where a anciant temple located the top of the mountain, and there was a older Buddhist monk telling a story and the younger monk listening. what is the story? the story is " so far from now, there was mountain where a anciant temple located the top of the mountain, and there was a older Buddhist monk telling a story and the younger monk listening. what is the story? the story is ......"(it repeated again and again...) the story is using for cheating the kids, when i was young, my mom want me sleep, but i don't want to sleep, i want to play..so my mom telling me the story, i listening it, and soon i was fast asleep. ...

 I have two story ideas. I've been thinking and plotting them both for a long time now. One of them, the first one, would not be written from a personal perspective. However, the second plot, is written from a personal perspective and would fit much better into the "write what you know" theory. The first plot involves revenge, sword-play, some romance, intrigue and definitely a surprise twist at the end. The second one focuses on a girl with a broken heart who is searching for her purpose in this life. She has a best friend who is her opposite. The story focuses mainly on the girl, but partially on her best friend as well. I was thinking about having the story be from the perspectives of both girls -- similiar to a journal entry -- and have their stories intertwine, etc. The story would involve romance, tragedy, family issues, and finding purpose. Which story sounds the most promising? ...